Shinkan no Tsuki…
A poem for those who speak too much…
The silence of the moon
knows no bound
the words it speaks
never are around
cruel it is
ears of conscience
voice of reason
never an audience
only a fool
such as i
would not consider
silence i defy…
The words we speak are only there for a fleeting moment. GIve others a chance to speak for themselves, and never hinder them from telling their feelings. If we do, we are even bigger fools than our words. For the silence of the moon, we know what it is to have a voice so grand and not an ear to listen.
August 17th, 2005 at 3:46 am
hi! ang lalim mo pre… but can i criticize ur works a bit? hehe d k na mkakatanggi…
in ur attempt to make the poem unfathomable, u gain lapses in grammar… be careful next time hehe pero promise ang galing mo…
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heheh… o nga no? de minsan kasi ginagawa ko nga tlaga yan hehehe…
nice crit! maiimprove ako nyan!! (evil laugh!!) :)I)